ab tere mere beech zara faasla bhi ho hum log jab milein to koi doosra bhi ho
tu jaanta nahi meri chahat ajeeb hai mujh ko mana raha hai kabhi khud khafa bhi ho
tu bewafa nahi hai magar bewafai kar uski nazar mein rehne ka koi silsila bhi ho
patjhad ke toot-te hue patton ke saath-saath mausam kabhi to badlega yeh aasra bhi ho
chupchaap usko baithe k dekhoon tamaam raat jaaga hua bhi ho koi soya hua bhi ho
uske liye to maine yahan tak duayein ki meri tarah se koi use chahta bhi ho
Comments
Comment by Bal on 2009-04-26 23:53:14 +0530
Pardhaan.. sapp hai bai eh… siddha dangg reha…
‘uske liye to maine yahan tak duayein ki
meri tarah se koi use chahta bhi ho’
snake aa bai…
Comment by Vaibhav Garg on 2009-04-27 17:35:15 +0530
Beware intensity increases with each line
maangti hai tu faasla, mein to de bhi doon
par en kaadmon ka kya jo sirf tera hi raasta jante hain
kaheti hai tu ke tere chahat ajeeb hai
par is chahat ka kya jo ek sheeshe ke paar jaise hai
maangti hai tu khafai, mein to de bhi doon
par is dil ka kya jo kaatre kaatre khoon tere naam ka hi maangta hai
kaheti hai tu ke koi silsila bhi ho, zara dhyan se sun
har saans is shareek ki aanginat silsile tere pyaar ke keheti hein
maangti hai to badle mausam, mein to badal bhi doon
per us eshwar ka kya jo is shristi ko sambhaalne ka naatak karta hai
chupchaap baithe ke dekhtee thi tu, paal paal un raaton ka mera swarg tha,
per hoon to insaan hi aakhir, tere pyaar ki boond boond ka pyasa
sooch samaj ke maangna, tere pyaar ka ye deewana kuch bhi karega
faasla, khafaiat, doori to kya, tere kushi ke liya aapne dil ka kaatal bhi karega
keheta hun ek baar phir, sooch samaj ke maangna
kyoki chaahyen ye aasma faat jaye ya ye jaan nikal jaye,
tere liye to mein bewafai bhi kar jaaunga…………..
— By Shri Great maha super guru Vaibhav Garg Ji dehradun wale 😡
Comment by Vaibhav Garg on 2009-04-27 18:08:36 +0530
the above in Hindi
(amardeep yaar type in Hindi. it is easy .. took me two minutes)
Comment by Sidhu on 2009-04-28 22:05:28 +0530
Oh man o man…great…turning poet 😉
Yea, will try to write in Hindi as well !
Comment by Sandeep Verma on 2010-05-27 23:49:39 +0530
‘BLOG’ tera paDha to mujhe sochna padaa
Main kuch na likh sakaa to mujhe sochna padaa
Mujhko thha yeh gumaa.N ke mujh hi mein hai ek Ada
Dekhi teri ada to mujhe sochna padaa
(|) keep it up…very good.
Comment by Sidhu on 2010-06-23 17:20:09 +0530
Thank you bai for the kind words 🙂
Comment by deepa on 2011-08-14 12:29:50 +0530
very good poem. you can type in hindi by going to settings and selecting the language. keep writing.